I know the hair is pretty scribbly and quickly-done, but the expressions - which are one of the most, if not the most, important things for a game of this type - are really effective.

Two complaints, however. You're consistently making her fingers really pointy and claw-like - you might want to tone that down with the more realistic style I think you're trying for. And be careful with the right arm in the biggest drawing, since it almost looks like her skirt is transparent in front of her wrist.

@Bibby: I'm not trying to make it particularly realistic.

Also, these are just sketches to serve as putting her design in concrete, drawing errors don't matter so much.

Thank you!

All right. Nitpicking aside, she's looking quite good, and I'm looking forward to seeing full drawings of the other characters...

Here is more Jun, while I'm used to drawing her:



A piece of promotional art, for use in my topics about the game. I will make similar drawings of other main characters. Topics will actually be made when I finish these pictures and make satisfactory progress on the game itself.

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Edited by: Fujiko, Jul 25th, 2011 @ 12:06 am

Nice scarf! When does she wear this groovy outfit?

At a few scenes.

Yeah, I'm being vague. This is only for promotional purposes and won't appear in the game itself outside the Image Gallery (name subject to change). Jun does wear this outfit, though, at some points.

Oh cool... I like it when games (whether indie games, fangames, or commercial games) include photo galleries and that sort of thing. Will it be unlockable, or will it be available from the start?

It will be available from the start, but there won't be much in there. You will unlock images by doing certain things or seeing them in-game.

It's been a while since I last drew The Beatles.



You know who they are: John, Paul, George, and Ringo...

The people on the left are children of each of them. They've got a few, but those 4 are the ones I'm used to drawing.

I wonder if you're the only person who's ever drawn Beatles offspring like that before. Also, it's good to see you drawing a couple of larger noses for once...