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Mitchstar's Comics
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Hmmmmmmmmmm. Maybe I'll add a topic where I will paste Comics
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It can be this topic. I'll change the title for you, if you want.
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yeah
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Personally, I think it's about time Peach got some bodyguards that were a bit tougher than Toads so she wouldn't have to get Mario to bail her out every time Bowser kidnaps her.
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Hey guys. I know it's been a while but I have a new comic with better sprites! http://imgur.com/mWq2v
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It's an improvement over your earlier ones, but there are still a bunch of things you could do that would improve it, besides making it longer. For example:
  • Fixing minor typos and grammar problems.
  • Making the lines straighter and making all frames the same size.
  • Using PNG image format instead of JPEG.

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Edited by: Bibby, Aug 13th, 2011 @ 10:35 pm
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Check out My new one. http://i.imgur.com/D0rzJ.png This one explains why Bowser never Kidnaps Daisy
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That answers that question! This kind of proves my suspicion that Peach doesn't mind getting kidnapped too much. After all, we've all seen her in Super Smash Bros at one point or another.
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That was your funniest comic so far, even if it was a bit random. I'm very pleased you switched to PNG format, since that looks better than JPEG. Try making the lines separating the panels look straighter - that would also improve the appearance.
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If you're using MS Paint, then hold Shift while drawing the lines, it'll keep them straight.
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