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Hip hop?
Fez
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So this is my WIP entry to the mfgg minigame competition. Quoted from there:
This was quite a challenge for me, given that I don't listen to hiphop at all. I also decided to try something new and I made all of my percussion samples from scratch (started with a straight 440Hz wave and modified it until I got the right sound).

My intention was to make something that sounds like it could easily be rapper over, given the theme. While I quite like both the other entries, to my ears, they didn't sound like something that would work as well with a rapper.

I would really appreciate any crits that you may have. Especially about the the bassline (or anything, really) because I'm not sure it sounds super hiphop-y, and I think it may take away from the rest of the song.
http://soundcloud.com/fezmasater/hiphop


I'd like to improve, and there seem to be some pretty music savvy people here, so I figured I could get some crits.
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I'm not a huge fan of most hip-hop music, so I can't say I'm much of an authority here. I enjoyed listening to your song - I think it would fit nicely in a cave level or a late-night urban area. However, your song feels more like jazz than hip-hop, especially with the piano. I'd suggest making the percussion stand out more.
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