Bibby
Not a bad story so far. I saw two typos you might want to fix ("aroud" instead of "around" and "held capture" instead of "held captive"), but otherwise it's a very good start.And no, I won't be leaking this to WikiLeaks MFGG.
Lol Wikileaks
Anyway, BlueGuy wrote the story and made a handy-dandy site for it. I'll tell him about the typos
